Wednesday, December 09, 2015

My Quick Write

I am blogging this because it is my favorite quick write and I put lots of effort into it.
I was learning to make a story with chapters and add in lots and lots of detailed information.

Chapter 1 Death
It was early morning and everything was good until a 6 year old found his mother impaled by a lamppost outside. He wondered who would do such a cruel thing? Was it nature or just a pure murderer?

Chapter 2 Life
The six year old was now 23 and he was a chef and an inventor. Right now he was making a cheesecake with a raspberry puree. He was the best chef in the business. When he had no work he was making a machine that brought dead people back to life. He went to his mother's grave and brought her back to life.


Chapter 3 Luck
Its casual just him and his mum in his car cruising around until he saw a tree was falling right above the car. They sprang out in the nick of time. KABOOM! The car exploded. They realised someone cut the tree down. They both fainted.

Chapter 4 Powers
When they both woke up they felt a little strange. When the 23 year old asked where he was he didn’t need the doctor to answer because he read his mind. His mother was right beside him and guess what she had super strength. The FBI instantly recruited them when they heard about their powers.

Chapter 5 Dirty Business
Their first mission was to find the criminal John Ankles and bring him to justice. Mike (The 23 year old) figured out where he was hiding. They drove to the abandoned warehouse and the mother smashed the door down. They took John Ankles to prison.

Chapter 6 Time Travel  (Final Chapter)

Their was a sudden flash of light in their backyard. It was them but from the future and they asked “Would you like to see who murdered your mum” and he agreed to go with them. They watched and waited until they saw someone it was his father. But wasn’t he in jail? He must have escaped. TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 7.


Comment if you want chapter 7.

Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Mythical Creatures

I am blogging this because I liked to learn about mythical creatures.
I was learning about a tonnes of mythical creatures.

Friday, November 06, 2015

Super Reader Task

I Am Blogging this because it was fun.
We Were Learning To Get A Book And Make It Into A Task.

I am a Super Reader!


Choose the book of your choice! Fiction or nonfiction. Put title and author below.
Title: Gone       Author: Michael Grant


Choose 4 of the following 7 tasks about your book!


Option 1:
Draw a character sketch for the main character in your book.

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Option 2:
Create a map that shows all the important places in your book.


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Option 3:
Create a reading comprehension quiz for your book.




Option 4:
Five favourite words - choose five interesting words from the book. Write the sentence in which each word is used and the meaning of the word.


Option 5:
Visualising - draw a picture of your favourite scene in the book.


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Option 6:
Advertisement - create an advertisement that persuades people to read your book.


Option 7:

Summarising - write a quick summary of your book.

Monday, November 02, 2015

My Hot And Cold Hand Calendar Art

I am blogging this because it was fun drawing this piece of art.


Here is my hand Art.
The hard part about this was that it took a long time because you had to outline the border with the color so that you don’t color over the lines and it takes longer the further you get because the border gets bigger.
The easy part was coloring the hand in.

The challenging part was coloring the border.

Monday, October 26, 2015

Mum Poem

Hi my name is Zayne and today I am blogging my poem.

I am blogging this because it was so fun being able to describe my mum and put it into a poem.


We were learning to choose someone that you know a lot about and describe them into a poem.


Mum Poem
Mum
She’s a:
Bear Hugger
Lolly Mugger
Bunny Hopper
Meat Chopper
Nice Cruiser
Brother Bruiser
Hurt-Heart Vanisher
Nightmare Banisher
Criss Crosser
Job Bosser
Baby Feeder
Time Needer
Really Fun
Doesn't Run
Need To Come
And See My
Mum

Written By Zayne Andersen.𐂌𐂌𐂌𐂌𐂌𐂌

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Volcano Scene

Hello my name is Zayne and today I am blogging my scene description about a volcano.
We were learning to use super strong adjectives in our story to make it more interesting.
I am blogging this because I think people will really enjoy ready my piece of writing.

Success Criteria
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • Your own goal Using text structures across genres.



When I turn around I can see the most devastating scene. Magma bubbling at the surface trying to escape. Sharp jagged rocks pointing to the scorching lava. Lava flowing through the rocks like a river.The lava is so impressively hot that it could melt anyone at touch. The misty moon hiding behind clustered clouds. Fluffy and gloomy clouds are hovering over the volcano to give the mountain a spooky feeling. the rugged and gigantic mountain is erupting at this moment . This devastating scene is amazingly dangerous.

Here is a word cloud to describe this image.




Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Stan Walker Report

Who Is He
Walker is a Maori singer that was encouraged by Guy Sebastian. Stan Walker was born on the 23rd of October 1990. His parents are called Ross and April Walker. He went to Fairfield Intermediate and boarded at New Plymouth Boys High. When Stan Walker was young he grew up on a marae in Mount Maunganui.


Upbringing
The thing that made him a good boy was that he started going to go to church at the age of 15. His parents spent a large amount of his childhood in jail. When Stan Walker was young he grew up on a marae in Mount Maunganui.

Australian Idol
He won the Australian Idol in 2009 when he was singing in the Australian Idol he continually got praised by the judges. Stan sang the song ‘Ordinary People’ to make it through the first round and it worked. When he was told that he had made it to the semi finals and finals he was excited that he had made it that far. The person he faced in the finals was Kate Cook.


Awards And Achievements
Walker's song Black Box peaked at number 1 on the New Zealand singles chart but number 2 on ARIA singles chart. In 2009 he won the Australian Idol. After the Idol Walker received an artist development fund worth $200,000. Stan Walker established his own company called (Stan Walker Music Pty Ltd) that was run by his mother April.



Conclusion
Right now Stan Walker is 24 years old and his company will still be making some more songs in the future that will encourage others to make some songs.